Dynamite david wigton debut comments

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Dynamite David Wigton enters the locker room and begins putting up his gear.Mario Gueste walks up to him.

Mario Dynamite David Wigton,hello I am Mario an interviewer here,i just wanted to get any comments you have on tonights matchup against Space Trucker.

DavidComments huh?Well i don't really have much to say,we both worked together before and i know the guy has alot of talent,but make no mistake,this match will end with a BANG!

Dynamite David Wigton walks away

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Wouldn't it make more sense if you'd put spoken text between quotes?
And put the speaker's name before it?
That way, viewers will know who's saying what.
I had to read this Dynamite David Wigton,hello I am Mario an interviewer here,i just wanted to get any comments you have on tonights matchup against Space Trucker. a few times before I figured it was Mario saying that to DDW.

When you put it like this:
Mario: "Dynamite David Wigton,hello I am Mario an interviewer here,i just wanted to get any comments you have on tonights matchup against Space Trucker."
People will immediately understand what's going on.

Subject: Re: Dynamite david wigton debut comments Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:33 am

agreed, it does show better

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