Sagat's debut

With some help of my brother, this is what I've come up with for my debut segment.

Quote :

As the show continues some new, slow-paced, heavy music hits the arena.
After a few seconds, a 7'3" tall mountain of a man comes walking out.
He's dressed in traditional Muay Thai gear, has his arms and legs taped up and wears an eyepatch over his right eye.
Another thing that cannot be missed, is a huge scar across his chest.

Announcer #1: "Oh my, Announcer #2...
Is that who I think it is?"
Announcer #2: "Over 7-feet tall... The eyepatch... The scar...
That can only be him!"
Announcer #1: "The former Muay Thai World Champion, 'The Emperor of Muay Thai', Sagat!"

As the man, identified as Sagat gets to ringside, he takes a microphone off of the announce desk, before rolling into the ring.
Once he's standing in the ring, Sagat takes a look at the audience and than he starts to speak.

Sagat: "For those of you who know me: brace yourselves, because you'll be in for the ride of your lives."

A few men in the crowd start to cheer.

Sagat: "And for those of you who don't know who I am: my name is Sagat.
I am a former World Heavyweight champion in my home country's national sport of Muay Thai.
But due to the lack of good competition, I decided to look for other forms of competition.
After trying several other things, my path eventually brought me to professional wrestling."

The audience seems interested in Sagat's story.
His intimidating physique must have caught the fans' imagination already.

Sagat: "And now I am here, hoping to have finally found some fine competition.
As everyone should, I shall start at the bottom.
But unlike others, I won't slowly work my way up the corporate ladder...
I will work my way up, leaping to the top in a way none of you has ever seen before."

The crowd is getting excited to see what Sagat can do in the ring.

Sagat: "So with all that being said...
Bring out my first opponent!"

As his opponent's music starts to play, Sagat gives the microphone to the ring announcer.
As his opponent makes his way to the ring, Sagat flexes and stretches his muscles a little more, to be fully ready for his debut match.

And my brother told me feedback can always help you get better, so: any feedback would be truly appreciated!

The RP is great and about the announcers , their names will be announced later.

I'll adjust it when they are known.

yup, looks good enough

Thanks. I hope my future RPs will too.
My brother won't help me forever you know.